first monorhyme
untitled Shadows that shift through waves as you drift upon that boat to lift the spirit whilst you are adrift in the nighttime skys falling stars are swift casting down dreams one gift to create...
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Quote:the spirit whilst you are adrift in the nighttime skys falling stars are swift casting down dreams one gift to create shadows that shift. Shifting Shadows as one's spirit dreams... Me likes...
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This is gorgeous indigo! I love the feel, and the rhyme too! Painting magnolia blossoms - upon cracked pavement steps. ~ gol
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You did very well this monorhyme making each line flow into the next which is a bit challenging with monorhyme poetry. I await the next one and other forms that you will try. Michael Chellew
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*group hugglies!* thanks y'all for checkin this envdeavour out and the replies left in the wake. indigo Fractured from the inside unseen is the battle which rages onward within behind these cracked...
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This is wonderful, the rhymes don't bother the way the poem expresses a very well written description of something that feels metaphysical. OM
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om, htank you very much for your insight on this one. glad to know the flow is nice! LOL indigo Fractured from the inside unseen is the battle which rages onward within behind these cracked eyes I've...
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I'm learning all these new cool forms as of late but really enjoying the shared words from the talented 1st timers. Enjoyed and excellent 1st attempt!"Inspiration blows from no outer sky but from the...
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This reads so smoothly! Transitioning from line to another with ease... I enjoyed the read. I think this may be the best monorhyme I've had to pleasure to read. You have inspired me, indigo! Thanks...
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That's certainly one form I have yet to try, but you did it with grace and ease.
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indigo - Very nice job indeed. Great use of words and rhythm in a most unusual style. Namyh
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thanks y'all so much! it's harder with some forms than others. I'd gone through my rhyming dictionary to try and work on this one. Listed the words first then wrote the poem. Again, many thanks...
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Most impressive. Thanks Alli for bumping this one. A gem. Lit with Kick!
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psycho & gab - ty both for reading an oldie! indigoTrue love knows no boundaries.The heart's found its way home, now the body just needs to follow!
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